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Fallen Flower 1 
8th-Jan-2010 02:32 pm
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Title: Fallen Flower
multiple chapters fiction
Pairing: haehyuk
Genre: Romance, Drama, Angst, AU
Rating: NC-17
Warning: Mean!Hae, Abused!Hyuk, RAPE!
Beta-ed by [info]hyukhae4ever and [info]tees2mai  Thank you so much!!!<3333
*English is not my first language but I had try my best
*Base in Japan around 1940s so please go to list of word at the end if you found something you don't know or just ask me ;D








Fallen Flower

chapter 1     

 





        It's in the middle of the 1940s, or as they call it in Japan, the Showa twenties period, when Japan started accenting other country's culture such as the American culture, into their country making, it changed a lot of things for the younger generation. Woman didn't wear only kimono anymore, they start to wearing dresses and working like the men.

While the men started wearing suits on important occasions. Short curly hair became fashionable and all the young girls would go to the hair salon every mouth for a new hair cut. The Folk and Jazz music become popular among every people.


All of the story started when the first Korean diplomat had moved to Japan for his work with  his family, they moved inside one large house in the middle of Shinjuku city.



“Donghae-sama Time for Dinner now”
The servant opens the door before calling the young boy who is still sleeping inside the warm, soft, futon bed.
“Aish…. I’m still drunk from last night…”
The young man groans before waking up, wrapping his arm around himself from the sudden cold hitting him, and lazily follows the servant.
While walking he tried fixing his kimono with one hand, while his other hand worked on making his messy hair presentable.

When they entered into the large dining room, he sat down, crossing his legs on the floor. He was secretly glaring at the man who already sat at the head of the table.

The man had white hair mixed with dark black hair which was slicked back neatly, even though he would probably go to bed soon. He wore a simple kimono which fit him perfectly since it was custom made, showing how rich he is. The skin on his face and hands were getting more wrinkled with a few stains due to his age, but every movement he made was slow and stable not showing any of his weakness.

Sometimes Donghae just wonder if this person was really his father.

Even though the room was filled with people, it was dead silent.
On the table sat his father, his mother, his brothers and sisters and the servant hovered at the door, ready to be called at anytime. No one dared to talk or look at each other’s faces, looking instead at their plates, eating as quickly and quietly as possible.

‘What an uncomfortable place…’

Donghae thought to himself while picking up the foreign Japanese food with his chopstick, quietly chewing on it while looking at the empty space on the table in front of him.

After a piece of meat in his was mouth gone, he picked up another piece and chewed on it. Nothing he ate tasted good. The food looked delicious and was set out magnificently by the servants, but it still didn’t taste fine to him.

‘But how come?’

The boy blinked his eyes, he thinking to himself again. He used to find all of it delicious before and dinner used to be his favorite mealtime of the day, after all the hardship at school, work, and lessons, dinner was supposed to the happiest time.

‘Happy?’

He looks around quickly, at all of his family members. He realized that he haven’t thought of that word for a while, and none of his family members' face can be described as ‘happy’, but the weird thing is, they didn’t looked uncomfortable either.
Maybe it would be better if they look uncomfortable, but they weren’t. They all just look so perfect.

‘Perfect?’

Well, He has to agree with that. His family could be described as ‘perfect’. He was born into one of Korean's upper class family, with a hard working father who was a diplomatic in Japan. A kind mother who had a beautiful voice as she was a singer before, he also had a perfect older brother who studies hard in Japan's most famous university. They all lived in a large beautiful house in Japan, and they all looked so perfect. So perfect, that it came to the point of being almost inhumane.
 
‘Inhumane?’
 
He couldn’t stop shaking as that word came to his mind; his chopstick was shaking so hard hitting his dish with an awkward sound that made everyone look at him.

“Are you okay?”

His mother turned to ask him, it probably the first time today that she was looking at him, but Donghae couldn’t feel anything but coldness in her voice. He knew that she didn’t ask because she was worried, she just asked because she fears his father would get angry soon.

“I’m fine, I’m full now”

Donghae answered before he stood up and quickly left the room; he has to find something to help him now.




‘Anything…. Just….. Anything…..’




 
When the sun was gone and replaced by the blue moon and thousands of stars shined in the dark sky, the sound of loud singing and music came out of a small bar again like every other night.

“Drink more!! Drink more!!!” the woman in dark Kimono sang while giving him another glass of strong alcohol and place another cheap food on the table.

“Come dance with us!!!” another woman with red lipstick and red dress pulled his white shirt, so he stood up and dizzily follow the woman’s dance, everyone clapped to the beat filling the dirty bar with loud noises. The bar was filled with the smell of cigarettes and sounds of folk song from record player behind his back.

All of this was just one of his bad habits. Donghae always uses all the money he has for gambling, prostitutes and alcohol again and again; even though he fully knows in his heart that what he's doing is stupid.
He didn’t know why he’s doing it either, he didn’t even like the taste of alcohol since it taste so bad and only makes him feel dizzy. He wasn’t really interested in woman much either, but he just plays with them since they all just seems to never leave him alone. He only wanted to make himself all dirty with sin to fulfill the emptiness in his heart.



And tonight just like any other night, Donghae was sitting at the counter, getting tired of the women all over him. His eyes were dropping shut and the room was spinning around him.

Suddenly, his eyes stopped as one boy, probably same age as him, walked into the room holding a food tray carefully. The boy come to stand in front of him and places another food plate before taking the empty one and putting it in his tray.

Even though his mind was fuzzy with Alcohol, he can still see how beautiful the boy was. His skin's so white and clear, almost transparent like, his lips are plump and red, even without any lipstick on it. His short light brown hair looked so soft, and somehow Donghae couldn’t take his eyes away from his white long neck every time the boy turned his face.

“What is your name?”
Donghae asked while looking even closer. He knows it weird to say this, but he must admit that the person looks really attractive to both male and female.
“Hyukjae, sir”
The boy answered awkwardly, feeling nervous as the other boy keeps looking closely at his face.
“Korean?” and Hyukjae just nodded his head, and Donghae didn’t surprised much as he heard his father complain about lots of Koreans moving to Japan these days, looking for jobs, for money.
“Did you come here for job?”
“No sir, I’m just working here for my family’s debt”
“How old are you?”
“23”
He kind of surprise to found Hyukjae was a bit older than him and debt… that was one of the words Donghae never thought before, what a poor boy, have to work hard at such a young age.
‘Interesting….’
Donghae didn’t know how long since the last time he found something interesting and the boy smirked to himself as some ideas came into his mind.

Everybody in the room gasped, and their faces look lost as a heavy bag was thrown next to Hyukjae with money falling all around the floor.

“Is that enough, Hyukjae?”

Hyukjae looked at the money in confusion before looking back at the boy.

“Sir… I think you misunderstood something.…”

“Don’t worry I won’t pay it for nothing”

Donghae quickly cut down his word and gripped on his wrist.

“I’m going buy you tonight, Hyukjae”

The last word Donghae said was barely audible, but loud enough to make Hyukjae's face going all red with anger.
Sound of strong slap reverberated all over the room, making everyone cover their mouth in disbelief at what Hyukjae just done, before he quickly run out of the room.

In the meantime, Donghae laughed and clapped his hands. One side of his cheek was reddening and it does hurt but he couldn’t stop laughing and found it all even more interesting.

Like a wolf who already knows its victory, Donghae lazily exit the room to follow the other boy. He feels as if he was chasing after a rabbit, but somehow he pretty sure Hyukjae couldn’t go that far, and he was right…

Soon Hyukjae was caught as he ran up stair tried to get into his own room, Donghae drag the boy into the room, making both of them fall on the floor. Hyukjae looked back at Donghae with fear and terror as he knows he couldn’t get away from it anymore.

Donghae quickly grabbed on Hyukjae’s wrist, while his other hand gripped on the older boy’s small jaw line tightly making him open his lips and moan in pain, giving a chance for the other boy to slide his tongue inside.

Sounds of sloppy kiss, pant and soft moan can be heard all around the small room as Donghae tried to suck on each and every sweet taste of the older boy’s lips. Saliva running down their chin, before they broke out for some air.

"P…Please! You are making a mistake!"

The boy cried out as Donghae quickly sit on top of his back, pulling the obi away from his thin waist and use it to tie both of the boy's hands together at his back.

"Doesn't matter...”

Donghae pushed the boy to face him again and grabbed on both of his shoulder, pulling the kimono down, exposing his thin long neck and white shoulder to the younger man.

“You are just so beautiful Hyukjae.” Donghae said while licking his lips. His eyes looking at Hyukjae’s beautiful face and the expanse of white skin on his shoulder and the nipples that are peeking out from the dark kimono, making Hyukjae shiver in fear, pleasure and nervousness. Inside Donghae's beautiful dark eyes, Hyukjae couldn’t see nothing but hunger and want just like a wild animal, getting ready to eat him up alive now.

"God…you're so adorable..."

Donghae whispered in pleasure with husky voice, before kissing the red plump lips again. His face went down to bite the others milky white skin leaving redden mark on it while all Hyukjae could do out moan out heavenly with tears running down his face.

He just wanted to kicked himself so hard at how his body responded so greedily to every kiss Donghae gave to him, suddenly his eyes go widen and he let out a loud moan as one of Donghae’s hand went inside his clothes gripping on his length making him realize how hard he become now.

Both of his cheek bright with shade of pink, as Donghae slowly move his hand, pumping on it, biting around the older boy’s neck and went to his shoulder before going down to the pink nipple and abuse it softly with his tongue.

“Ah!! It’s hurt!!!” Hyukjae screamed out as Donghae uses his teeth to bite into the quickly hardened nipple before he does the same thing to the other waiting nipple.
“I thought you would have liked it rough?”
Donghae said with a teasing tone before biting even harder, enjoying the view of Hyukjae’s face shadowed over with pain and lust.
“Sir…. It’s really hurt…. Please stop….”
His weak voice was shaking even more, begging on the other boy, hoping that he will stop soon, but it all seems to be useless as he could feel more pain on his chest.

“Call my name...And maybe I’ll stop.”

Donghae said after he gave a last kiss on the now tender redden nip. His hand left the now fully harden length and move down his body, pushing all the clothes that covered Hyukjae’s body away, making all of his clothes lying on his back and his bare skin fully visible to his eyes.
That's a trap, he is lying, and he knew Donghae wasn't going to stop it, but what can he do now? His hands were tied together now, and no matter how much he cried for help, no one is going to hear him anyway.

“…Donghae…”

He whispered the name, more tears running down his face. It’s not tears from pain anymore, but tears for how pathetic he must look right now. He cried more as his pride got stepped on like a bug on the sidewalk.
His voice is got even louder as Donghae pushed him to face down the floor and grabbed on his hips, lift it up, forcing him to stand on his knees.

“..Wha… What?” Hyukjae turned to look over his shoulder and he really want to die with embarrassment as he saw the younger boy was taking a good look at his body before sticking his tongue out.

“No!! Wait!!! Ah!!! ahh….. a..”

His entire body shuddered with pleasure as the warm tongue stubbornly found its way inside, both hands gripping on his hips tightly, to prevent him from moving away, and load moans left his mouth freely as dark lust slowly taking his mind now.

Donghae frowns at how tight Hyukjae was using both of his thumps try to open it wide so he could get even deeper; tasting all of sweet flavor inside before Donghae broke his kiss and make Hyukjae laid on his back on the tatami floor. He takes a good look at the boy’s face again to see the most precious picture he ever saw in his life.

Hyukjae’s chest was moving slowly up and down from his breathing. The clear tears was running down from his dark eyes, sweet scent from his body that was playing with his lust, and the boy’s skin was even more white and soft then any flower he ever touched before. Sweat running down to his chin, the pink tender opening getting more red from the light abuse, while both of his eyes were all dark and all of this was making Donghae lose his mind.

Donghae smiled as he wipe the other’s sweat off his chin by his thumb, and took his white shirt and pants away before lifted both of Hyukjae’s legs up and place it on his shoulder. He grinned at how Hyukjae didn’t even bother to defended himself anymore so he use his hands going under Hyukjae’s back taking the obi that was tied his hands away and whispered softly into his ear.

“Good boy….”

A loud scream reverberated all over the room as Hyukjae could feel his entrance being forcibly ripped apart, accepting the harden cock that was finding its way inside, his hands grabbed on a larger shoulder as he tried to released his pain, while Donghae groans out softly at how tight the boy was.

He cried and cried and unconsciously tightened his muscle around Donghae, making his head fall forward into Hyukjae’s shoulder at how tight the entrance became but it only turned him more.

“So you really like hurt do you?”

Donghae said while he slammed his large cock all the way inside the other’s body, making him cried loudly, panting as he try to endure the pain.

“Your first time?”

Donghae said when the sick smell of blood hit his nose and Hyukjae nodded. His face was burning red as he felt so ashamed and embarrassed which made Donghae smile. He started to kiss all the tears away before slowly moving his body and whispering softly into the older boy’s ears.

“Don’t worry…. Hyukjae…It won’t hurt long…”

Hyukjae knows that it was another lie Donghae told him.

"…d….Donghae...."

The pain was always there, ripping his body apart each and every time Donghae hit on his prostate, but soon he starting to get used to it he couldn’t help but follow the other, and his body refused to listen to him now.

“Where should I come?.... Inside? Outside?..... Or maybe in your mouth?”

Donghae whispered the words that show how much experience he already had with a soft chuckle while fingers played with redden swollen lips. Hyukjae blinked as he could barely understand what Donghae was talking about.

“w…What…?”

Donghae try so hard not to laugh at how confused Hyukjae looked right then, he gave a languorous kiss on those beautiful lips before whispered huskily into his neck.

“You will know soon…”

Hyukjae gasped and couldn't breathe anymore as Donghae was gripping on his waist tight, slamming his hardened cock against the sore entrance so fast and hard, abusing it until he left few bruises around it, but all of the pain was taken away as Donghae grabbed on his cock and plump on it to make him also feel the pleasure.

Suddenly, his eyes go wide as he could feel something hits him deep inside. His mouth open wide as he couldn’t even scream now and all of his body shuddered and white cum splitting out on the other boy’s abs while he could feel warm cum filling the inside his sore entrance.
When it’s all finished, Donghae took his now soften cock away from the boy, leaving Hyukjae to pant breathlessly on the floor, his whole body shaking from both earlier orgasm and sudden coldness, and the last thing Hyukjae can remember was both of Donghae’s beautiful eyes that were staring at him.

On the other side, Donghae was also panting.  He wipes all the sweat away from his face. He had to admit he didn’t use all of his energy like this in such a long time, before looking around and trying to found a bed but frowns when he couldn’t find one.

He looked around again and realize that the room he was in now was an old but clean room with small round table in the middle, a kitchen that can only fit two people in it with an old small ice box that made of wood and an almost broken radio.

“Hey! Where is…..”

His words cut off as he found Hyukjae already fell asleep on the floor. He sighed, pulling the boy onto his chest before using their crumpled clothes as makeshift blankets to cover them both and closed to get some sleep too.


‘God…. Fine…I can sleep on the floor then’









つづく。








list of Japanese work that appeared


sama - is the term for calling someone who are more higher rank then self.
Tatami - a type of flool in japan http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tatami
Man's kimono- click here to see picture
btw つづく mean to be continue ;D



A/N: ANOTHER LONG MULTIPLE FIC!!!! XD
Anyway I don't know... this is totally just because I want to write something about HaeHyuk in Showa 20~
and ummm it's not that exciting and Hae is BAD~~  since I want Hae this time and Hyuk being abused alot<3
(Yes, I have pervert and Sadistic as my last and middle name, you know 'Rabbit Sadistic Pervert')
btw I got inspired a bit by this book
I'll try my best on it and hope you will enjoyed it ;D
Thank you so much for stop by and read it and you know I love Comment so much XDDDD
Comments 
8th-Jan-2010 05:33 am (UTC)
SPOT for tees2mai as you asked and beta<3 ;D
Thanks!!!
9th-Jan-2010 06:51 am (UTC)
im pretty sure u know i love this story!!

im DYING to see what happns when hyukkie wakes up XDD

im goin to pretend i know nothin abt the story <3
8th-Jan-2010 05:34 am (UTC)
Spot for hyukhae4ever
Thank you so much Dear<333
8th-Jan-2010 06:51 am (UTC)
yay.... another multi-chapter fic from you... \(^o^)/
I'm really excited...

ahhh... no one can resist Hyukkie's charm...
but poor him... *pouts*
Hae, must you be that rude to him... you enjoy abusing Hyukkie aren't you? ahahahaha...

wonder what'll happen when they woke up in the morning? *wink*
8th-Jan-2010 06:00 am (UTC)
SPOT! *hug*
8th-Jan-2010 06:09 am (UTC)
LOLZ
*hug you back*
8th-Jan-2010 07:08 am (UTC)
MY SPOTTT!!!
8th-Jan-2010 09:00 am (UTC)
LOLLL as you have said bfore, you are GOD of perverts xDDDD

how Hae did hyukkie this time *Q* *flails*
god i would love to be inside of your brain for a day,, this is so hot and sexy
and i really cant wait for the next chap<333

*squeals* you. your writings make me addicted to abused!hyuk xD
and no im totally not complainingxDDDD

*hugsss**
8th-Jan-2010 11:36 am (UTC)
THIS IS CRAZY!!!
your writing has improved a lot and this time your story is super sexy!
Hae is this rich- extra cool- bad boy (I can sooo imagine that) and Hyukkie is the poor waitress paying for his family debt. He must be super cute since DongHae quickly jumps and throws a bag of money for him! (i wish i can do that, it seems super cool! haha but maybe i'll have to do that with monopoly money because I won't have a bag of money to throw out)
the smut is WAAAAY COOL! Hyukkie is such a virgin slut, it's like ... straight from a porn movie!
I'm already waiting and anticipating for 2nd chapter now. look what you've done!



okay ... i better go and finish my own story ...
wish me luck!!
8th-Jan-2010 11:46 am (UTC)
OH MY, is it CRAZY!? XD
OMG OMG you just make me so happy!!!and also thanks to Tee and HaeHyuk4ever who beta-ed for me too XD
YES!! Bad-boy Hae and Bad-luck Hyukkie!! XDDDDD
That's my dream to thrown money at him and buy him too LOL maybe we can make bag of money by putting all cheap coins there you know? XD
Aren't we so sadistic here!? XD

LOLLLZZZZZ PORN!!! LOLLLLLL XDDDDD
I promise I'll try to update it as soon as possible<3
and wish you good luck on your fic Baby!! ;D
*hug tight*
8th-Jan-2010 11:53 am (UTC)
yay!!~~
multi-chpter fromu!!~~im starting to love this!~~

of course hyukkie is so beautiful and irresistible,,and only donghae can have him!!~~bwahahahaXDD
*slaps myself for liking abused hyuk*
plz update soon~~~ <333
8th-Jan-2010 11:57 am (UTC)
Yes Multi-chap<33333
OMG really!? Thank you so much<33333
Bwahahahahahahha LOLZ
Oh well it bwasn't our fault though!? I think it's ALL Hyukkie's fault for being too cute making us want to abused him so much! XD
I promise I'll update soon! Thank you so much;D
*hug*
8th-Jan-2010 02:34 pm (UTC)
O___o Ahh,rape scene!

*thinking hard*

I think we're getting more and more perverted here XDD Can't help it especially when Hyukkie is so adorable and cute and sweet and so innocent look-alike and sooo...oh God,fucking fuckable XDD THERE I'VE SAID IT! XDD

The theme for Showa is very nice,I used it in my fic before but to tell you the truth,it will start to mess with your mind once you lost your inspiration *evil laughter* so to not let you lose your inspiration,you have to write as fast as you could and post as soon as possible! I'm not threatening or manipulating you,really *innocent smile a.k.a evil smile* You got me? XDD

Update soon!I know Donghae is going to bring Hyukkie home and you'll give us more rape scenes! *ROFL*
8th-Jan-2010 03:32 pm (UTC)
Yes, well in my head there's always NC-17 BL in there XD
and I can want to abuse on cute fuckable Hyukkie LOL

Oh!you write Showa before!?8D

You know that's so true!that why Im always listen to Showa song and try to write down everything as soon as possible
well good thing is I got my plot down

LOL ..O..OK...I got it baby...LOL


I promise I'll update soon
Thank you so much!!
8th-Jan-2010 03:14 pm (UTC)
greatgreatgreatgreatgreatgreat
new fics!!!!! lolz
ok i know i should read b4 i comment (can't stop flailing)
i'm just so addicted to your fics <3
8th-Jan-2010 03:36 pm (UTC)
AhahahahahaXDDD

addict!? to my fic!?

Omg!OMG!THANK YOU SO MUCH!
8th-Jan-2010 04:01 pm (UTC)
multi chapter..yay! <3
haha you're a pervert but i love you LOL
poor hyuk though...there will be so much abuse on him i guess from your little note XDD
8th-Jan-2010 10:50 pm (UTC)
Yes~~ hahahaha XD
Aww I love you too<33333
and yeah.. poor Hyukkie xD
abuse??....well.....fufufufu *mystery laughed and wink at you*
8th-Jan-2010 04:18 pm (UTC)
DONGHAE-SAMA~~
owh.......... can't stand this fic ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
I love the 'first time' fic hhohohohohohohohohoooo
and hakama is always suit for.............. fjafnafnaldskcfnalkfca
gyahahahahahahaha
Love you always ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
8th-Jan-2010 10:52 pm (UTC)
XDDDDD
Donghae sama♥
First time is always good XDDD
and hakama is always cool! XD
Thank you so much!!
Love you too Baby!! ;D
8th-Jan-2010 04:38 pm (UTC)
oh Donghae is so mean to Hyukie!!~ .... I looove it xDDD
Maa~I'm sure Hyukie'll fall in love with him soon ( and Donghae too uhuhuh~♥)

i look forward for the next chappie!!~<3
8th-Jan-2010 10:59 pm (UTC)
Yes Hae is mean and bad this time~~ XDDD

fufufufu...hopefully he will too *wink at you*

Thank you so much! ?I promise I'll update soon ;D
8th-Jan-2010 05:35 pm (UTC)
This is amaizing, I'm interested of this ..... Totally sexy~ Ghahaa!

I love this already. X'D
8th-Jan-2010 11:08 pm (UTC)
Sexy!? Really!? XDD
Oh I'm so glad<333
I'll work hard on this and Thank you so much!!;D
8th-Jan-2010 07:55 pm (UTC)

ummm it's not that exciting and Hae is BAD~~

YOU MUST BE KIDDING ME TAN!! (a bit excited as I am now..LoL, sorry)

ohohoho~ I've been waiting for so long for your new fiction....after killing myself with school work, kekeke, I'm resurrected by you..

BAD DONGHAE is good for us sadistic..and poor EunHyuk being rape again (as if i don't like)...OMO, what am i saying, I'm getting perverted also... *runs*
8th-Jan-2010 11:28 pm (UTC)
XDDDD No! I'm nootttt XDDDD
I'm really not confident XD

ahahahaha really!?*blush*
Aww I hope my fic will help you feeling better from hard work<33333

Bad hae is alway sexy!! and poor hyukkie XD
We just so pervert and sadistic here XDD
8th-Jan-2010 09:42 pm (UTC)
I LOVE IT~ it was smexyyy :) love your fics as always..KEEP WORKING HARD!! YAYYY YOU CAN DO IT!! :D
8th-Jan-2010 11:29 pm (UTC)
XDDD Thank you<333
I'll work hard on this!! Fighting!!!!!
Thank you so much!! <33333333
8th-Jan-2010 11:36 pm (UTC)
S P O T for me!! <3

congrats for 1st place smut !!!!! luv u!!! XDDDDDD
8th-Jan-2010 11:50 pm (UTC)
XD
Aww Thank you so much 8D
<33333
9th-Jan-2010 01:14 am (UTC)
oh damn this is good!and wtf! hae raped cute monkey! but it's cause hyukkie is too irresistible. and good things i know basic japanese lol.
9th-Jan-2010 01:24 am (UTC)
OMG Thank you so much!!! *blush*
Yes!!So true!! No one can resist that cute Monkey<3333
Oh you know basic JP? Yeah!!! XDDDD
Thank you so much for comment and reading<3
9th-Jan-2010 01:33 am (UTC)
awww poor hyukkie! he must be scared of hae now!
don't worry he won't always do that to you!(i hope)
and donghae's family sounds so sad! :(
*sigh*
how you get your ideas but whatever it is i hope it keeps your muse going!
;P
9th-Jan-2010 01:39 am (UTC)
Yeah I bet he is too :(
Poor Hyukkie but well maybe thing will get better...
or worst? XDDDD *wink*

Yes... his family are sad and that's why Hae becoming like this too XD

and Yeah I'll try to work hard on it Baby ;D
Thank you so much<3333
9th-Jan-2010 07:28 am (UTC)
i claim a spot for the next chappie^^

im hook on this story already^^♥
9th-Jan-2010 07:31 am (UTC)
XDD OK<333
I'll spot for you then<3
Thank you so much!!8DDDD
*hug*
10th-Jan-2010 05:35 am (UTC)
Yay~ I learn a japanese word lol
omo! I love u!! *o* This is totally my kind of fic! :D
Abuse Hyuk/Hyuk got raped woot! XDD (Yes, Im a weird person)
Can't wait for your next chapie~ (:
10th-Jan-2010 05:43 am (UTC)
OMG TEAMIN!! *fangirling your icon*

XDDD I'm glad that you learn something from here XDDD

Oh Really!? Wow XDDDD
Thank you! I was really worried if anybody will enjoyed it 8D
XDDD You are sadistic! Just like me so it's OK XD
I promise I'll try to update next chapter soon

Thank you so much!
10th-Jan-2010 06:18 pm (UTC)
OMG. YOU MAY SHOOT ME FOR BEING SO DARN LATE 8|
but unniieee~ this is so awesome *w*
I always love abusive!Hyuk and bad!Hae xD
update sooon! <3
Fighting! x3
11th-Jan-2010 11:30 pm (UTC)
OH NO!!I didn't want to get arrest yet!! XDDDD
Thank you so much<3333
abusive Hyuk and Bad Hae are so hot in my idea XD
I promise I'll update soon<333
fighting!! xD
14th-Jan-2010 09:22 pm (UTC)
ahhhhhhhh hyuk got rapedddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

okay, seriously why do i sound so happy -sigh-

probably because i just read a fic that hyuk was top... it was strange, because hyuk most of the time is bottom.

so hawt. idek ;_____________;
15th-Jan-2010 02:31 am (UTC)
LOLLLLLL
Oh Well Every body love to see Hyukkie getting abuse like me, isn't it? XD
I personally can't read Hyuk being top that much XD;
It's just kind of weird for me coz I always thought Hyukkie was bottom since first time I saw them together XD
Thank you so much<3333333333
17th-Jan-2010 01:53 am (UTC)

O.O
i just can say..
OH MY SHISUS!!!...

you let me in shock!
love you kisses!
17th-Jan-2010 05:04 am (UTC)
OMG
*try to wake you from shock*
XD
Thank you so much<3
and Love you too!! Kisses<3
13th-Jul-2010 02:11 pm (UTC)
backreading is osm. found this and i never regretted doing some backreads. osm story, perfect for 10:00 pm and it's raining here.<33 hahahaha
3rd-Aug-2010 08:58 pm (UTC)
Hi,
Your fiction is really interest.

Hae was so bad boy, and hyuk was so sheepish, innocent and adorable!.

I really like the way the s**.

Scary Hyuk know the words hae said are just lies but he keeping to belive it and call Donghae name with the cute way ^^.


I really like this fiction, it soft~ I want to share with my friend, but they not really good at english, so I wannna ask you, Could I Translate This Fiction to My Language(Vietnamese)?
If you accept please sen the email to me : sunshinejenj@yahoo.com

I waiting for your Permission.


Thank you!. ^^.

P.S. : I waiting for another fiction write by you, friend. ^^.
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